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Inventions such as eyeglasses and the sewing machine have had an important effect on our lives. Describe another that you think is important. Give specific reasons for your choice.

What do you think the most important inventions? Some people think improving medicine and finding a electricity. In my opinion, the most important inventions are a car. Thanks to the car, we can easily travel, spend time to go shopping, and easily go to work.
It is easy for us to travel by car. In the past, many people rode a horse to travel, but this slow and dangerous. Some people fell down the horse. Now many people take a trip by car. It is easily to go to a place where you want to travel.
You can buy many foods by car. If you do not have car, you could not buy lots of foods. At first, you take a bus and you reach the supermarket. You can buy little drink and food because you can not bring them to your house. By the way, if you have car, you can buy many food and lots of drink. You just put on your car, and you drive to your house.
A car gives us a good job. When you do not have car, you take a bus and you walk to your company in the morning. However, this is very slow. The need that you have a good job is time. The world always changes fast like light. You need to know the changes to get a wonderful job. A car gives you enough time.
In conclusion, although there are many important inventions, a car is the most important inventions. A car gives us easy traveling, shipping, and working at a good job.

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